Serious Writing

Harper Lee is a novelist best known for her Pulitzer Prize winning work, To Kill a Mockingbird. In documenting her life, Charles Shields records these words from Lee about about the writing task [Mockingbird: A Portrait of Harper Lee (Henry Holt, 2006) p. 258]:

“To be a serious writer requires discipline that is iron fisted. It’s sitting down and doing it whether you think you have it in you or not. Everyday. Alone. Without interruption. Contrary to what most people think, there is not glamour to writing. In fact, it’s heartbreak most of the time.”

A Real Writer

Two-time Pulitzer Prize-winning journalist/humorist Gene Weingarten collected 20 of his best articles that have appeared in The Washington Post over the years and published them as a new book titled The Fiddler in the Subway (Simon & Schuster, 2010). In the intro he writes about writing:

“A real writer is someone for whom writing is a terrible ordeal. That is because he knows, deep down, with an awful clarity, that there are limitless ways to fill a page with words, and that he will never, ever, do it perfectly. On some level, that knowledge haunts him all the time. He will always be juggling words in his head, trying to get them closer to a tantalizing, unreachable ideal.”

Truth be told, Weingarten came pretty close to this ideal in his April 2007 article, “Pearles Before Breakfast” which earned him the 2008 Pulitzer Prize for Feature Writing. The article is included in the book.

Sdrawkcab Gnitirw: A Word to Writers (and Preachers)

One way to add creativity to your writing (or preaching) is by writing backwards. Not like I have done in the title of this post, but by writing backwards in the linear development of your thoughts.

We naturally develop thoughts from left to right and from top to bottom so it requires a little practice to train you brain to write from the bottom up, from the close to the start, from the main point to the supporting arguments, from the punch-line to the background. But it’s worth a try.

I sort of taught myself to do this after I discovered that my penchant for premature punch-lines was a problem in my prose. I am one for getting straight to the point in conversations, in emails, and if you’ve read this blog for more than a month you know this is true in my blog posts. I get to the point quickly (normally in the first sentence) and while this makes my point clear and obvious it can also limit my logic and suffocate creativity. I’ve learned that I need to slow the progress down, build a little more, anticipate questions, prepare the reader, and provide more background. So sometimes I write backwards.

Let’s say I set out to write a short blog post with one point: only in Christ will sinners find their hope. But I don’t want to get to the point too abruptly, I want to follow a creative path.

Writing backwards asks a simple backwards-looking question: What point leads to this point?

So what point leads to a reader to appreciate the hope we have in Christ? In this case, the objective truth of the gospel will need to be explained first before the hope will be concrete hope. What point leads to this point? The hopelessness of a lost world will need to be explained from Scripture. What point leads to this point? Perhaps the idea of man’s hopelessness from the writings of a non-believer would work. Perhaps I would pull a quote from Joseph Conrad’s writings. What point leads to this point? I should introduce Conrad’s realism that he brought to literature and his role in shaping modern English literature. I’ll stop here although I could continue working backwards.

Now turn it around. When I actually write I then say something like this: Joseph Conrad is a key figure in the development of 19th century English literature. He is known for his honesty about the deep hopelessness in the human heart. [Choose one example and insert here.] Then something about the fact that even realistic non-Christians can see the hopelessness of the human condition. Joseph Conrad could see the darkness. So what’s the cause of Conrad’s hopelessness? Sin. Here I would add a biblical explanation for sin, the death and resurrection of Christ, and then arrive at the punch-line: our only hope is found in Him. I’d title the post: Conrad’s Hopelessness (or some theme pulled from the intro).

This practice of writing backwards benefits my writing in four ways:

  • Creativity. By writing backwards I tap into the creative side of my brain. It allows me to chase an endless trail of connected ideas. You could have arrived at the same point through a million different paths.
  • Logical development. By writing backwards writers can often more carefully think about how supporting material contributes to the linear progress up to the main point. Sometimes it’s easy to understand the point but difficult to see the path to that point. Writing backwards exposes gaps in my logic.
  • Introductory options. This style often helps the writer understand where to begin. Because the intro is the last thing that is written and you can continue working backwards until you can go no further. In my post I could have gone even earlier than the perceptions of a non-Christian fiction writers. I could have talked about my early disdain for fiction. I could have lamented by education. You can run out a long tail of connected ideas and then choose where to cut the tail (ie where to begin your intro).
  • Conclusion focus. This writing style helps me build everything else around the main point. The main point is always at the center of my thinking. It keeps my post focused but prevents me from stating it too quickly.

Preachers can use this, too. Sermon points can often develop backwards off one another. And each sermon point can be developed backwards for improved logical flow and enhanced creative elements (like illustrations).

There are a number of other uses for writing backwards. I think it’s a nice little trick every writer should consider using at least once and especially if you, like me, are too quick to the punch-line.  

Prohibitions and Visions: A Word to Writers

We writers of Christian non-fiction face a natural tendency to focus on helping a reader decide between rights/wrongs or prohibitions/allowances. This is not always a wrong choice in style, but often it’s not the best choice. As a writer you can do better. Learn to set forward a clear, positive, and compelling vision for your reader. Instead of focusing on limits, focus on possibilities and if those possibilities are consistent with Scripture they will naturally dwarf the prohibitions. Achieving this is not easy, but neither is it complicated. Nor are good examples of this hard to find. Case in point, the new vision-setting book on ambition. In it very little space is devoted to convince the reader to avoid laziness. Laziness is the archenemy of ambition, right? Yet how many times does Dave Harvey use the word “lazy” or “laziness” in his 224 page book? Never, not one single time. Why? Because his book attacks laziness with a compelling picture of ambition. Help the reader embrace a compelling vision for life and you will write something that no list of prohibitions/allowances could ever hope to achieve.

My favorite Starbucks

I doubt I exaggerate when I say that I’ve ordered coffee in 100 different Starbucks stores in my life, spread across 15+ states. I’ve help support new ones, old ones, some in airports, a couple in Target or in grocery stores. I frequent one store weekly and another local store I avoid like Sanka.

Each store is unique, but deciding which one is my favorite is not difficult, it’s the one about one hour east of where I live that we stumbled upon as a family one Sunday afternoon during a sight-seeing drive around the Chesapeake Bay. We drove up into the town of Annapolis, Maryland, the state capitol and home of the Naval Academy. The Starbucks we discovered was in the basement of an old hotel and was first opened in 1784. Lore says Benjamin Franklin once enjoyed a drink there. It was a pub at the time. Later the pub morphed into a jazz club and four years ago it became a Starbucks.

It has undergone a lot of change but the stone walls, stone floors, and the thick lumber in the ceiling holding up a historic hotel above it are all original. It sits just across the street from the state capitol building and the governor’s mansion. An old underground tunnel from the state house empties into the back wall of the basement Starbucks, providing an escape for diplomats. While the back half of the store is no longer used as a safe haven for sprinting politicians, it is a nice and cozy and quiet place to read and write (unless a hobbyhorse lobbyist is trying to make a convincing point to an associate at a nearby table—then you’ll need earbuds).

Converting a historic marker into a Starbucks was not easy and a friend who lived in Annapolis at the time (2005-2006) said it stirred up quite a brewhaha. But I’m glad it was converted and it’s now my favorite place to re-caffeinate.

Here it is on the map and here’s a poor iPhone pic. If you are in the area, you should stop in.

So where is your favorite Starbucks or coffee shop? What makes it great for reading/writing?